Julia Bell's got my manuscript. *holds breath*
I met with her tonight and she'd read section one.
She didn't say 'Don't give up your day job.'
She said I could write; she liked my style.
She said I was right: I've started in the wrong place.
She said when I re-start I should change to the third person.
She's going to read some more tomorrow morning and we'll talk again.
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